October Girl

Robyn I nodded. I looked at my palm, hiding it from Alex's view, the cut had turned black, like tattoo ink. I clenched my hand, and turned my attention back ...

whoa Pol this was so freaking awesome!!! It sent chills down my spine, I agree with the user above me, coolio names love ya your friend as always -Max

whoa, this was like.... deep.... I love it, bravo :) it was depressing but not boring whoa.... good job -Max

Robyn "Oh, I'll leave, but I'll come back for him." The figure said, then it dissapeared. I back pedled so fast I fell on my ass. I fell down onto ...

oooh nice very nice after this post I want to be your bff lol, I like this I can't wait for more!!!

Robyn The figue made me hold out my hand, it took a knife and slit my palm, then it slit it's palm and took my powers I felt like all ...

Robyn I ran to the book, and it shut. "What the hell?" I turned to see the figure, holding my baby. "Give me back my baby!" I yelled. "I'll give ...

I like this, but no offence I fail to see your point in the matter, what's the emotion? What's the story behind it? How did it happen? Why should I ...

Robyn I faught against his hold. "Let go of me!" I shouted. "You need to tell me." He whispered in my ear tightening his hold. "Your hurting me, get off." ...

banned for having a problem with being a YWS memeber ooooh what now????

Name:Phoebe but everyone calls her Lee age:17 (she's been around since the school started) gender: Female Species:Vampire Personality: She is a protecter towards everyone, more like a leader, she lets

Robyn I matched upstairs, I slamed our door, but didn't lock it. I put a hand against my flat stomach then snatched it away, now knowing I was no longer ...

Robyn I pushed him off of me. "Their not learning magic, I will fight you for this." With that I turned and walked up the stairs. Sam "Very much jealous." ...

Robyn "Maybe you should! Hell go get married to her!" I growled. "And if you do it behind my back, there will be no other children." I said pointing at ...

I think it was a little stiff, no offence of course but I think you should be sending a sign to the reader something like "ooooh!!!! I want more! s/he ...